This fact means that you have very few lines for them to read before they make a decision. Make those lines count! Consider carefully that top 10% of your email. Is your company logo, a piece of stock photography or some puffy copy really the most important communication you want to have with that 69 percent?

I know it’s hard to do (I have fought designers on this issue for years). But you have to hold your ground and fight for that 10% of real estate. Let them do whatever they want in the bottom 10%, but you absolutely must make your first impression space matter. Tell your readers right there why their feedback matters to your company and how much you value it. Tell them exactly how much time it will take them to do your survey. You are fighting for that next action and that next click. And at this point, that’s all that matters.

Terence Fugazzi, VP Demand Marketing, Allegiance

1. First you have to get them to open it!

Lets put aside the topic of deliverability (that will be another post no doubt) and just focus on the message. When an email comes into someone’s email box, the subject line is a big factor in whether or not they will open it. Most people can only see the first thirty or so characters on the email in their Inbox and based on that information, they decide whether or not to hit delete or click on it. It’s important to make your subject line short and sweet and often to somehow identify who you are as a company. For instance “Jen, help Costco serve you better“, or “Christine, what shoes do you want to see at Nine West?”

In the example above, you’ll notice another thing that will help you get people to open your survey emails…Personalization. Studies have shown that if you use your DB data (and you can use more than just their name – think city, purchase data, gender, etc.) to make the message personalized, you will get more opens.

In closing, here is an example of what not to do for a subject line “Please take our quick and easy online survey to help us steer our business for your needs today and for tomorrow.” I think you can see why it would not be effective, but I cannot tell you how many times I have seen email subject lines like that – right before I hit ‘delete’.

Next in the series – First impressions matter